In lesson we gathered everyone in the class around and everyone viewed eachothers trailers and gave feedback on what they liked , what to improve and how to make it more appealling.
The group came up with various points on are trailer that stood out to them and we are now in the process of correcting these imperfections.
The first was in one of the clips of the trailer , as the villain is running down a bank there is a vast amount of diagetic sound due to the wind which ruins the clips quality and therefore we need to get rid of it by taking all sound out of that small clip and filling it with non diagetic sounds such as the background music or modd music.
Some of the changes from clip to clip are too slow and lack continuity and some of the clips that contain text are either to quick to read a large texts before cutting to a narrative clip or they are to slow for only a small piece of text. This is an issue of paramount importance for us as we need to make sure we have flowing continuity in the trailer as it helps to build up tension and keeps the audience interested and focused instead of them getting annoyed by the editing errors.
The last issue that the group picked up on was the speed of the clips by the end of the trailer when we are really trying to make it as tension as possible leading up to the climax. We corrected this straight away in the session and after viewing it again saw an immediate improvement.
The group analysis was very productive and after taking in the feed back it has allowed us to set new gaols for our trailer to reach and has brought to view new techniques that we will be executing in order for our trailer to be at its best.
good!
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